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36. Writing an Essay
Bradley was a typical "cool" guy. He was
captain of the football team dating the head
. He was rich, tall, and good-looking. He was
the president of his high school. Bradley had
problem. It was his grade in English. He
't write an essay to save his life. He
trouble coming up with ideas.
Bradley's final English
was supposed to be about his role model.
wanted to write about his football coach. Bradley
he couldn't do well by himself, so he
the smartest student in class to help him.
was going to pay Melody $10 an hour.
invited Melody to his house.
"Okay Bradley, start
an interesting sentence that's going to grab the
's attention." "How about 'Soccer is called football in
countries'?" Bradley suggested. "But that has nothing to
with your topic," Melody said. Bradley felt bad. "
, don't feel bad. Coming up with hooks can
challenging. Why don't you use a quote that
coach said?" Melody suggested. Bradley thought that was
good idea. His hook was "Football is an
, not a game."
Check
Hint
OK